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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6331
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

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Nowadays,the trust between people and people plays a crucial role in the society system not only for the personal but also for all.How to keep on maintaining trust with others has become an important problem. First of all,in the treatment ,we'd better to pour our emotion in it in order to win the trust naturally.Because the given always is equal to the return in our daily life. Then,it proves that the one who pays much attention to keeping the relationship can win the trust of others.Last but not least, not cheat in treatment even in some little things. In my part,I have experienced benefices of others' trust,which helps me resolve many problems in work and in life.Therefore,I will try my best to maintain the trust with my friends and leagues.

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