文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling With knowledge quickly development,most and more students learn English in school.The most college people think that learning English is very important.However,how to study English well?What is important things that our learning?This is become popular topic. We find that English spell is matter in base study.If you not spell English word,you should not writing and reading in language study. Why the thing happen? Some reason for the questions. Firstly,We don't know that American knowledge or language development. Secondly,student not careless in learning.They don't care of learning word. How way to change this phenomenon? As learning language,in my opinion,background of country is important.Like Chinese,we known that Chinese built from voice and graph when older people and environment. By learning English,we not difficulty find that learning word need careless and hard work in every time.As study place of college, we should built place help student learn English with other.