文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling. With knowledge quickly development,more and more students learn English in school.The most of college people think that learning English is very important.However,how to study English well?What important that we learning?This is becoming popular topic. The key of learning that words spell.If you not spell English word,you should not write and read in language study. Why the thing take place? Some reason for the questions. Firstly,We don't know that American knowledge or language development. Secondly,student careless learning.They don't care of learning word. How way to change this phenomenon for new environment? As learning language,in my opinion,background of language is important.Like Chinese,we known that Chinese built from voice and graph when older people and environment. We not difficulty find that learning word need careful and hard work in every day.As study place of college, we should built place help student learn English with other.