加强句式的变化,会取得更好的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;词汇表达较丰富,学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,文中有些单词拼错了。
Listening,speaking,writing is three steps to learn english.So students,do a lot of exercises including them.Nonetheless,currently,pertty number of sutdents who are smart,and their academic performance is poor,sometimes.Why? A very necessary to solve problem is in front of them.There is no denying that students are busy has plent more homework,which leads to have less time to study spelling.It is a tremendous work,i think.Furthemore,they think it is ok that understand what's mean. For change it ,from my perspective,i hold that everyone needs to change their thinking,in addition,the should foreknow the importance of spelling,next ,just do it.They will get succeed if they do it right away.