作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Recently,there are more and more people realize that the useful of a certificate. So a amount of people take part in many different exams to have a certificate. Such as China English Test 4,6 and so on. people's opinion on the certificate craze vary from person to person. Firstly, Some people think if they have one or more certificate they will have more opporituity to have a better job. Secondly,Others think that they should have different abilities to adopt the complex society.But which can prove them they have different abilities? There is no doubt that the answer is certificate.Thirdly,Quit a few people craze for the certificate is just for learning. On the oppose side some people believe that certificate craze is nothing but useless. we should pay more attention to our specialist. As has been discuss above,in my way of thinking,I support the opposed side people,we really should pay more attention to our specialist.To blind pursue the certificate is not helpful for our future.