2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

School is our second family，also we expect it should be clean and healthy，to name but a few.As the proverb goes:find surroundings effects a person,thus, it is essential for students to have a green campus.What's mean of 'Green Campus'?There is not only have a wonderful evironment,but also the healthy of ambience. At present,we should use our little own power,which makes campus more and more healthy and lovely.To begin with,stop the rude of behaviors,such as throw the paper and spit anywhere,or speak loudly in the public.Additionally,we can plant some flowers or trees,let it increasly well. In summary,we still have a long time way to go.