2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

on the recent society ,some person make good use of the trick to get the private benefit, the cheat often happens in all kinds of field,in addition ,some person can't keep their promise ,it result that the trust gets losing in the mutual relationship of the people ,the people don't believe each other. the distrust is the seriouse problem of the society,it permeates every aspect of the sociey and affects the normal life of the people. how to regain the mutual trust during the people to keep the social good function? maintaining trust is the method to change the critical condition of the society.after all,only a tiny minority are the cheater and the liar in the society,the most of people are honest in their moral principle.maintaining mutual trust promotes the social credibility and enhance the confidence of the public credibility.