文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句采用很棒。
Some people said that parents are the best teachers when they children was born. As the same time, parents will take care of and teach follow them group up .so, It’s is not true to say that parents are the best teacher. First of all, I think not all parents are good teacher parents just to look after them children or help them in life and education is a solemn course that parents not have educate experience, some parents can’t be a good teacher. However, a obviously distinction that parents and teachers not only the parents are the best teacher, but also the teacher in school as well as. And children in school can received a normally educate by school teachers so that developing them. But children may a bad affect by some parents, because some parents have a not good habits or other .For example, smoke, lazy …that others like this can cause children misconduct, As the matter of fact, most of parents just to kindness to they children and help them solve some problem in life .However, they have lot of ways of education to children .These will be influence to children. In a word, whatever people are the best teacher, we need to parents to guide children in them life, but the school teachers teaching them knowledge and how to through the life in school.