作文要求:
写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。
字数要求:
300字以内。
从句使用量稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
As the developmen of scientice and technology,Computer has been used in various field.It provide convenent for user,for example, calculating data, inquiring doucument, staticing information, and so on. The machine carry out lots of surprised behaviours, which include playing football,ordering menu,but it do not take place of the mankind. Because every of us have an unique organ, the brain. It can think about and handel questions,for the sake of its activite. As the computer don't have intelligence, it accomplish the tasks according to the people's order. In the other word, it only come true passitively. This is the importantest difference from the brain and the computer.