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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46262
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Time changes everything,referring to the time,I could not help but feel sad.November11,2006 my boyfriend and I comfirmed the relationship until today we have been together for seven yeas.All of my friends are married and have children,some one even divorced.I think love is sad,there is no forever.I want to with me together forever but I don’t want to get married.Actually I have no idea why?Perhaps subconsciously afraid of marriage ,because so many people or friend married life is not happy around here.Romance,passion,quarrel,divorce,two couples who loved each other to become the most familiar stranger.Therefore,time can let two unrelated people together also can let two people who loved eath other to become a stranger.

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