Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Time changes everything,referring to the time,I could not help but feel sad.November11,2006 my boyfriend and I comfirmed the relationship until today we have been together for seven yeas.All of my friends are married and have children,some one even divorced.I think love is sad,there is no forever.I want to with me together forever but I don’t want to get married.Actually I have no idea why?Perhaps subconsciously afraid of marriage ,because so many people or friend married life is not happy around here.Romance,passion,quarrel,divorce,two couples who loved each other to become the most familiar stranger.Therefore,time can let two unrelated people together also can let two people who loved eath other to become a stranger.