Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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My Typical Day My typical day is very simple,sometimes it`s called a dull day. Usually my alarm clock rings at 6:00 am,then I get up and wash my face and rinse my mouth about 15 minutes.After that I will go to the playground at 6:25 am and do morning exercise form 6:30 am to 7:00 am.Then I eat my breakfast about 30 minutes.I read English from 7:30 am to 8:00 am.My class begin at 8:00 am.It is 11:20 am that until my class is over.And then I have lunch at 12:00 am and there is a short break about 90 minutes.At 2:00 pm my class is begin and it stays 3 hours.About 6 :00 pm I eat dinner .After that I do my homework until 8:30 pm.Later I come back to my dromitory.And I surf the Internet until 10:00 pm.I am ready to go to bed at 10:30 pm. Every is smilar but I believe I can make a difference in every day.