作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;能够使用一些不错的从句。
Currently,a very essential problem is how to read.In accordance with a survey,some people hold that we should read books while other believe we need to select what are worthy to read.In this essay,I will discuss two totally different argument and offer my own view on it. Nowadays,as a proverb goes:having a good book means to have a good friend,thus,there is no denying that books will bring us tremendous effects,moreover,unfavorable or nice.So,a great number of people believe we should select books,which are positive. However,a totally different argument is raising,almost people hold that all books should be read,which will make us power and knowledge,to name but a few. From my perspective,the first point I agree.To begin with,there are many books all over the world which is worth reading,additionally,most importantly is that read books that are helpful.Moreover,I don't mean other books have no impact,just less. In conclusion,select books can help us more if we read that.