2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Nowadays it seems like that people can't live without computers. It's provided its specific help in everyplace we live, such as school, libery, hospital, workroom and so on. Since it has been invented, a mavoulous development of computer has been written in human's history. With the great change of the society, it is no surprise in finding a child using a iPad. The popularity of the computer is out of imagination. Confront with this topic, there has a argument that some people are insist that the wide spread of computers is contributed to our society, but the opposite emphasize more about the disadvantages of it. The positive oppinions are things about the convenience of the computer, the strong function of it and so on. The opponent are saying that the connect of people is longer and longer after the computer is become the main way of communications. And many teenagers is addicted to the computer games which is harmful to their study. As far as I can concerned, the relationship between human and computer is not a-word thing. The saying "Every coin has two sides" explain it perfectly. All we should to do is being more intelligent so we can judge the way we choose is right or wrong. I believe we can go further and further.