题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇基础扎实;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays it seems like that people can't live without computers. It's provided specific help in everyplace we live, such as school, library, hospital, workroom and so on. Since it has been invented, a marvelous evolution of computer has been written in human's history. With the great change of the society, it is no surprise in finding a child is good at controlling the computer. The popularity of the computer is out of imagination. Confront with this topic, there is an argument that some people are insisted that the widely spread of computers contribute to our society, but the opposite emphasize more about the disadvantages of it. The positive oppinions are things about the convenience of the computer, the strong function of it and so on. The opponents are saying that the distance of one person and another is longer and longer after the computer become one main way to communications. And many teenagers are addicted to the computer games which is harmful to them. As far as I am concerned, the relationship between human and computer is not a-word thing. The saying "Every coin has two sides" explain it perfectly. All we should do is being more intelligent so we can judge the way we select is right or wrong. I believe we can go further and further.