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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36852
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分40.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I have a good firend her name is Mary. she is a beautiful and intelligent girl .we have played since childhood.she have lots good habits and my parents likes her very much .once a time ,she came my home.My father asks her one qustions ,how do you usually plan your own future?what kind of things do you like do ?how do you plan it?suddly there is a seris of anwsers speak out from her lips ,that time she is only a five years old girl,she is amazing.As for she is how to anwser this qustions,and I think she is smart.

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