2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。

today,more and more people use of the computer,like loving phone.they spend the time that should study or do good things in playing computer. in the first,the computer is good to help us study,but now it is not so .some parents think that the computer is bad for their children.they are not support their children to play it.of course,there are more good in our life.it make our angle large.the eyes can arrive the place that the foot cannot,the computer can arrive the place that the eyes cannot.