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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
My Typical Day My typical day is extremely simple,sometimes it`s called a dull day. For the most part, my alarm clock rings at 6:00 am where I should get up.After that I spend 15 minutes washing my face and rinsing my mouth.After that I will go to the playground at 6:25 am and do morning exercises form 6:30 am to 7:00 am,which does good to my health.Then I eat my breakfast about 30 minutes.After that I read English from 7:30 am to 8:00 am,which helps me improve my English.My class initiates at 8:00 am.It is 11:20 am until my class is over.And then I have lunch at 12:00 am besides there is a short rest about 90 minutes after lunch.At 2:00 pm my class commences which stays 3 hours.About 6:00 pm I eat dinner.After that I do my homework in the classroom until 8:30 pm.Later I come back to my dormitory.And I surf the Internet before 10:00 pm.When I am ready to go to bed it is 10:30 pm. As we all know,every coin has two sides.Every day is similar but I believe I can make a difference.
