2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping During the social deveopment,it has be a kind of fashion what is shopping on online. So,more people spend too much time to know about the goods piece through computer. But,on online shopping have differences views form people.some people think it is good,because on online shopping is convenient as themselves lifes,they don't leave home to kinds of supermarket.So that,they will feel relax or happy.Other people think it have a lot of problems,the quality is low sometime,or the good spend too much time to train. I think that on online shopping is good for our,because it will save ourselve time to do other something.