2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

As we all know,an unyielding will plays an essential part in succession.Without it,people are easily beat by hardship. What's more,oniy a person who possesses a strong will has more opportunities to attain their goals and gain achievements.It is because that kind of men are more likely to survive after suffering from difficulties.They have a clear understanding of their tasks and always stick to them. Not only should adults have a strong will but also we students are supposed to keep an unyielding will,for that not worked hard,we wouldn't become a man of achievements.