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假如你是李华，是育英中学的学生。五月十二日四川地震爆发后，你和你的同学度过了几个不眠之夜。请写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍你们那几天的主要活动及感受，向21世纪英文报投稿。
要点如下：
1．每晚观看新闻，关注灾区救援工作的进展；提示：
灾区 the striken area遇难者 victims默哀observe silence
能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；过程性词汇偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
I am Li Hua,a student of Yuying middle school who spent a hard time helping people with my classmates after the earthquake which jolted Sichuan on May12th.During the disaster,everyday I paid much attention to rescue work of the stricken area by watching tv.A good idea flashed across my brain that I decided to donate all my money to the quake-hit area and went to sale newspapers voluntarily at weekends.And In order to observe silence for those victims,I had already contributed to newspaper and the network.Not noly did I but we all observed silence for three minutes on the afternoon of May19th.
