- 分享到:
题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Nowadays, most of people have a quick lifestyle. In my opinion, I prefer that life with a slower pace. First and formost, a slower pace can give us more time to think about what we want and how should we do.When we are hurrying to do something, we can't have a clear method.Then,it'll spend our lots of time and we won't have a satisfied result.So, I believe that spending time to considering our questions isn't a time-waste thing. Further more,I remember that there is an old saying that when we hurry to do something, we may miss the most beautiful scenes in our life. In our life, there isn't only have our jobs,we also have our families and friends,I think they are the most important things for us in the world. We should spend time with our families and friends. We can finish our work quickly, however, when we accompany our families, we should slow the pace down. Finally, everyone's life is limited, life just like a paper, and we can decide how to draw it. we should learn to cherish our life. When we become old, someday, maybe we recall our memories, we should feel very enjoyable and thankful.So, when we let our life slower, we will have different feelings and we can have different recognision about our life. In summary, when we are fatigue, put down the work and just let our life slowly,then we will feel life is so beautiful!
