2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达不够灵活，拼写错误比较多；部分句子偏简单，注意有错误的句子；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

You hear the rafrain all the time:What is success?What can I do for success?I think we should remmerber the rules:more faste,less speed.It could date at least to the appearance of confucianism in Spring and Autumn period. The way to success is fulfill of setbacks and challenges able to depress us.Meanwhile,