2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中用词稍显贫乏；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

You hear the refrain all the time:What is success?What can I do for success?I think we should remember the rules:more haste,less speed.It could date at least to the appearance of confucianism in Spring and Autumn period. The way to success is full of setbacks and challenges able to depress us.