2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；采用了一些简单的从句。

As we can see from the picture ,the higher degrees in the education ,the lower unemployment rate and the higher weekly earnings .The information is came from Bureau of Statistics,Current Population survey ,and it aimed at person aged 25 and over whose earnings are for full-time wage .Some salary workers also take part in . This picture shows 8.7% of normal college graduates will face unemployment problems,and their salary is also low . Why would this happen ?I think there are many reasons. On the one hand ,the condition of global economical is not well. Many famous company are meeting with financial problems .On the other hand ,the students are not compete enough .The should study more hard to improve themselves .We must to continuing to improve ourselves to suit the fierce society . All in all ,according to the statistic, we can feel the realistic social ,we may be stressful .But what we can do is to accept this and work more hard .