题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Trusting is the bridge between two people.As long as they are on maintaining trust,their relationship can be steadier and steadier.So it is no doubt that keeping trust is good for the relationship.If we don't trust everyone who is around us,we will worry a lot that why he or she is cordial with us and what benefit does he or she intend,and then we will let us keep far away from the other people.In that way,no one is willing to make friends and be nice with us,even we are in trouble.So if you ask me whether keeping trust is necessary for us or not,my answer is positive. A government can be strong not only because of the economy development but also the trusting of the masses.As long as the masses are on maintaining trust the government,the government can be harmonious.And a harmonious government can be focous on the development of the national power.When the government is in trouble,all of the masses will support it right now. To sum up,there is no doubt about the power of the keeping trust.