请作者增加词汇丰富度,同时注意单词拼写的检查;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Limiting The Use Of Disposable Plastic Bags In recently,there is an phenoneman about using plastic bags.The disposable plastic bags is using by people in public. The environment will be pollucted in this situation. The choice by people will dut to bad outcome. For example,Firstly, the soil will be pollucted because of the disposable plastic bags will not disappear. And the second,the plants will not absord the enough nutrient .And the third, some of animals will not eat the grasses enough. The rain will be pollucted.Finally, the air will not clean ever. According to this situation, we can do that encourage the people try to use less disposable plastic bags. Why to do that ? Because it can be good in the ground. And the grass will be better. Finally, it si benefit to protect our home, project our environment and earth.