2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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In recent years, there is a common believe that the quality of life is drop in particular to those large cities. In this essay, the causes and solutions will be pointed out. The reasons of those who believe that our quality of life is worse than it used to be, may include the factors as stated. To begin with, the environmental pollution may be the first priority, since we need to breathe the air in every second in order to live, due to the fact that people have no alternative option could be made. Furthermore, the health condition of the citizens become worse, because of the pace of live is faster and polluted environment. Last but not least, the stress of work is server than ever. This is mainly caused by people who lives in the small cities are try to go to those large one, in order to have a better paid job, meanwhile this phenomenon lead to limited job opportunities been pursuit by an increasing numbers of people, which directly result pressures to employees. The solutions for the above reasons may include the followings, to start with, the pollution problems could be resolved by investing environmental friendly products by providing tax relive to the organization aim to stimulate them in develop new technology. In addition, the citizen could do more exercise in order to improve their health conditions, and enhance their awareness towards the importance of health by training and educating. Finally, the citizens need to learn how to master themselves to cope with the stress. Psychiatrists’ help may be needed for deal with the increasing pressures from lives. To sum up, there may have some decreasing over the quality of live but we could figure out the solutions for each cause in order to improve our quality of life.