小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

There are three people in my family.My hunsband Andy, and My son Mark and me. My hunsband work in ShangJing. He is sales manager. He fourty year old, but he looks very young. many people was say to me. i work in XiXiang, i am person clerk.My son in Shangxi school.