文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
Everyone has a name, a name can represent a person. Therefore a name is an important thing to be possessed that people can use it not only in daily life,but also in every occassion. In addition, a name may be contain much emotion and pray that come from his family. In contrary, some people believe names play little role in our life.Because a name can not discide a person, it just a name. What's more ,everybody can have different names,although a person has other name, he still is him,this means name is just a symbol. as far as i am concerned, i think name relate to us significantly. it can help us identify people when we want to call a peroson in crowed, in another way, we can realize someone who call you. plenty of people have a worth name in china,which protect you in some aspect.