拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
Everyone has a name, it can represent a person. Hence a name is an essential thing to be possessed that people can use it not only in daily life, but also in every occasion. In addition, a name may be containing much emotion and pray that come from his family. In contrary, some people deem names play little role in our life. Because a name can’t decide a person, it just a name. What's more, everybody can have different names, although a person has other name, he still is himself, this means name is just a symbol. As far as I am concerned, I consider name relate to us significantly. It can help us identify people when we want to call a person in crowed, in another way, we can realize someone who call you. Plenty of people have a worth name in china, which protect you in some aspect.