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能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。
Everyone has a name can represent a person. Hence a name is an essential thing to be possessed that people can use it not only in daily life, but also in every occasion. In addition, a name may be containing much emotion and pray that come from his family. In contrary, some people believe names is footy. Because a name can't influeces a person, it just a name, a mark. What's more, everybody can have different names, although a person has the other name, he still is himself, this means name is just a symbol. As far as I am concerned, I consider name is related to us significantly. It can help us identify people when we want to call a person in crowed, in another way, we can realize someone who call you. Plenty of people has a worthy name in china, which protects you in some aspects.
