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Everyone has a name can represent a person. Hence a name is an essential thing to be possessed that people can use it not only in daily life, but also in every occasion. In addition, a name may be containing much emotion and pray that come from his family. On the contrary, some people believe name is footy. Because name can't influence people, it is just a name, a mark. What's more, everybody can have different names, although a person has the other name, he still is himself, this means name is just a symbol. As far as I am concerned, I consider name is related to us significantly. It can help us identify people when we want to call a person in crowed. In another way, we can realize someone who yell you. Plenty of people has a worthy name in china, which protects you in some aspects.