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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
要求:
题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Everyone has a name can represent a person. Hence a name is an essential thing to be possessed that people can use it not only in daily life, but also in every occasion. In addition, a name may be containing much emotion and pray that come from his family. On the contrary, some people believe name is footy. Because name can't influence people, it is just a name, a mark. What's more, everybody can have different names, although a person has the other name, he still is himself, this means name is just a symbol. As far as I am concerned, I consider name is related to us significantly. It can help us identify people when we want to call a person in crowed. In another way, we can realize someone who yell at you. Plenty of people has a worthy name in china, which protects you in some aspects.

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