小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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Last Sunday we went to the Feicui lake. We run more than 20 kilometres and some students got tired. The lake was very big and the sun was shining. On the east of the lake was a university whose campus was very beautiful. On the west side of the lake was a hotel. The hotel looked elegant and no one of us had ever got there.