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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;全文结构较为严谨;能够使用一些不错的从句。

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As time goes,you can see computers everywhere,as you know,it is becoming our human beings daily's necessary step by step.I can't think the image you sit behind a desk,and just wondering there.It is wast your time.So you should find something to do,and if there is a computer in frond of you,you can do the things whatever you want. Computer is very important for us,not only for us learning and studying new things,but also for workers doing their businesses.You can search the class you wan to study,there will be many classes videos,you can learn from it.For workers,they can connect with each other by the computers,and it is very efficient to deal with the company's work. All in all,computer is very important for us to do many things,and we can't leave it now or in the future!

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