2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,many parents who have fixed their children’s problems their entire lives.it has cause many problems.we can not notice the penomenon that the children can not do nothing without their parents.I can’t help asking:why the parents love their children so much in this way? We must know the fact that parents should love their children in correct ways.children should not depend on their parents everything.in order to let their children become independent,parents should not give hand at once when the children face the difficulty,trying to let them learn to deal with it by themselves.parents have no neccessery to help the children do some housewoke,such as washing their clothes,making their bed,cleaning the floor and so on. In a word,if parents want their children to become independent.must don not give more.