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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5525
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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Nowadays,many parents who have fixed their children’s problems their entire lives.It has caused many problems.we can not notice the phenomenon that the children can not do nothing without their parents.I can’t help asking:why the parents love their children so much in this way? We must know the fact that Parents should use the correct way to love their children.Children should not everything is dependent on their parents.In order to let their children become independent,parents should not give hand at once when the children face the difficulty,trying to let them learn to deal with it by themselves.parents have no necessary to help the children do some housework,such as washing their clothes,making their bed,cleaning the floor and so on. In a word,if parents want their children to become independent.must don not give more.

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