Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Education Pays According to Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey,education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.People is alway not too old to learn.if you want to live a rich life, you should spend much time studying. This data is for person age 25 and over.he could earn 1551$ median weekly in 2011 when he got a doctoral degree.The high degree just have a low unemployment rate 2.4 to 6.8 in 2011.The opposite is ,if someone has less than high school diploma,he could earn only 451$median weekly in 2011 and has a high unemloyment rate .by analysis,education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. All in all,in recent year,we must adjust the new economic time,it require more and more people who have a lot of kownleage.we need to learn more tech and enlarge our horizon.only do it,we can be accept by new time.only do it,we can live a rich life. only do it,we can get what we want.