2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the survey above,we can easily find that,in general,if one person has got higher education,not only will he have more oppprtunities in jobs choosing and less failures in employment,but also he is more likely to gain higher incomes. Well, I think this principle is reasonable for the reason that if it's not,it will definitely change the attitude we face education.Moreover,we will choose to drop out of school as early as we can since there is no diffence in our salary no matter how many education we have got. however,I also think that the distance between the top and the last is ridiculous as we can find that the earning the top have is almost four times as the last.Therefore,such problem may arouse unharmoniness,even serious crime.