2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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with the development of economic , Nowadays, online shopping is more and more popular.There is no doubt that online shopping is a good thing,but every coin have two sides ,of course ,online shopping have some disadvantages . There are many benifits in online shopping .Frist,it is quite convinient ,we bourght things at home .Second, all kinds of goods you can choose on the internet.Third,it is much cheaper than physical store. we must admmit online shopping have some disdvantages,the big problem is that we can not see the real thing so we don't know weather the goods is good or bad.At the same times ,the credit payment system is not complicate.when we buy things by online shopping we must pay attention to the secuity