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The Day My Classmate Got Injured The accident happened last month.When riding home,Jack unfortunately fell over due to the stone lying on the road on such a dark night.His left leg was severely injured which meant he had to lie in bed for a whole month to recover. No sonner we heared of the concerning news than all of us went to hospital to visit him with bunches of flowers and some fruit.Classmats tried their utmost to relieve him of pain by telling jokes.Teachers were much more thoughtful,they told Jack that he had better stay in bed not worrying too much about study because one student will come to teach him each day after class.From then on,we did as what teachers say and Jack adapted to the special study.Everything went smoothly through our effors. From the experience,I feel warm and encourging by giving others a hand and I will try to help anyone in need in the future.
