题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;请注意分段;副词使用偏多。
Trust is an important thing in our life.If you want to instruct someone to do work, you must be bilieved.As we all known, when you break your promise, even only once, someone will not trust you any more.So it is difficult but also important to maintain trust. However, many people do not realize it, they think it is not a big thing to lie somebody sometimes.Admittedly, sometimes we have to lie someone in order to not hurt them,for example, when our relative is badly ill, we may lie to him/her to bring him/her some faith to overcome the desease