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Always we say we will be the guy who we want to be. It seems if I want to become Chris Rock who is a comedy star in America, Iwill be.We dream we will achieve success just like Mayun or Chenguangju one day, but it's not an easy job.The sentence"we will be the guy who we want to be"means if the will be so strong that we can take 100 more times' actions than others, the dream will come true, or, it's just a dream forever. Nothing succeeds without a strong will.At our young age, our dreams had so much that we changed all the time.Even if when we grow up, the dream is incessantly changing.Is the dream which we often talk to others our real dream?Most of us really don't know which think is our favourite. As a result, we can't insist on doing it.If you find out the thing you love mostly, then you will find you have a strong will to keep on doing it until you achieve success.If the dream is not your actual dream, you will give up when you face the difficulties. In conclusion, if you want to be successful, to cultivate your hobby is the most important thing, everyone should have one thing which will keep on doing on the whole life.
