2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Today , people are fed up with all kinds of advertisement which can be seen on TV，journals ,newspapers and every possible places .It seems that adverting has become a part of life , although advertisements have some negative effects . We must admit that advertising has some vice influence .For example ,some promotion advertisements may exaggerate the products' function ,which can mislead consumers .Besides ,some advertisements revolve around violence and pornographic contents which is unhealthy to people's mind ,especially to adolescents . Although advertising may have some negative effects to some extent .Its importance should not be ignored .Advertisements make people familiar with the products , their functions and the methods of use .Some public interest advertisements also play an advocacy role in society . In conclusion ,our life cannot escape the influence of advertising .but on the other hand ,we must ban some deceptive advertising .