2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用比较准确，文中词汇表达稍显贫乏；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

with the social and technological development, computer is becoming a necessary part in people's life. when it contribute to many aspect of the society,it also remains some negative impacts. to begin with, playing computer for a long period can easily casue healthy problem. computer play many roles in our daily day, for work, entertainment.