2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays,online shopping development is very fast .What's more,it already becomes a fashion. Online shopping have many advantages,example,convenience.We want to buy whenever is ok,we can't walk on the stress rainy or sunny.We need't take these bags of buy.Many goods are cheaper than shop.In a word,online shopping are good for us. Though it's very good for us,it also have lots of defect.Maybe we are goods of online buy quality not good.Sometimes,the size of clothes are not chose right. So,i advise people before buy these,you can look go to marktshop,try it on and chose right of size,then you go shopping online.At this rate,you maybe economy a lot of money .