2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

as an old idiom says every road can get to the roman. that means everyone can gain achiecement inspite which way he chooses. i think there are three steps to success. first,you need a eager mind to success, which is the foundation. having a dream is like the farmer haveing seeds. and also like the lighthouse in the sea which guides the right deriction. second, action is the pivotal part to success.