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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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希望作者在学术词汇的使用,单词拼写方面都能能更熟练一些;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Sincehis creation, the electricity has taken an important place in ourlife. Using new technology or simply electronic things has become anusual act. Today,people is very dependent on that. Some of them think that livingwithout technologie is like to live in the hell. Although it's anexageration, but it's what they feel when they don't have access totechnology or electricity. Forthe example, during the blackout of 2009, almost all traffics wereaffected in Sao Paulo: so people could not have access to transports.Others were victims of blocking in skyscrapers, or deprivation oftheir works. Also,people though that the period which they stoped using devices orconnecting to social networks was very difficult, because they feltsomething was missing in their life. Buton the other hand, some of them enjoyed the event , because in theiropinion that it changed their life positively. Indeed, they spentmore time with their family or friends than with their computers ormachines. They were more social. And they did some good things whichthey never did before: watching stars with others. Forthe conclusion, the technologie makes our life better . Because todayit's easier to contact some one, to do something, to go somewherethan in the past. But it's important to know that being totallydependent of technology is not a good thing. Because sitting in frontof your computer all the time makes you unhealthy, and it moves youaway from the real life. Soliving with technology have avantages and inconveniences.

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