2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the internet techenology developement,the online shopping rereasingly repopular by people.whatever young,dult,even old peolpe,they have learnt on online shopping. However, On online sopping also has two sides.It is conwenient to some people. Such as ,it can save their time,they can buy some goods that they need of when the people by bus or eat coffe orwork.one the other side，some people don‘t trust the products online，they think that the fake is too much，and the price so cheap that they can’t believe it is true.Maybe, there is some fake or cheap. From my perspecktive,the government should take some measure to prevent unreasonable business.besides it,the consumer should buy goods moderatly.