2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the internet technology development,the online shopping decreasingly repopulate by people.Whatever young,adult,even old people,they have learnt on online shopping. However, On online shopping also has two sides.It is convenient to some people. Such as ,it can save their time,they can buy some goods that they need of when the people by bus or eat coffee or work.one the other side，some people don‘t trust the products online，they think that the fake is too much，and the price so low that they can’t believe it is true.Maybe, there is some fake or cheap. From my perspecktive,the government should take some measure to prevent unreasonable business.besides it,the consumer should buy goods moderately.